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Wow. You're a good artist! I'm going to check out the rest of your comic!
Some of the defined pencil-shading-texturing might be intentional, (on the walls, it looks great,) but on his jacket, it looks a bit odd. Maybe blend it a bit more?
The hand/gun/cloth lines and the last pannel are super! Maybe add an extra pannel with Mr. Boss backing Mr. other man into the room so you don't have to redo the last one, because it looks really cool!
Oh my. This is a long comment!
Some of the defined pencil-shading-texturing might be intentional, (on the walls, it looks great,) but on his jacket, it looks a bit odd. Maybe blend it a bit more?
The hand/gun/cloth lines and the last pannel are super! Maybe add an extra pannel with Mr. Boss backing Mr. other man into the room so you don't have to redo the last one, because it looks really cool!
Oh my. This is a long comment!